Peer Review

 

                                                                            Hello 

            In today blog I'm going to be talking about the feedback I got form making my magazine 

Many of my classmates stated I had too much going on the page, and you couldn't see the words I needed to highlight more for audience to see. Like my double page spreads for example, I believe through the changes you can spot a few little adjustments which add improvements to my magazine.

Then: 

Now:

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